Class Feedback

Within our class we had a the time to watch each others music videos so far and give them a what went well and an even better if. Also we had to grade them on what we think they should get. Within this video is some of the sheets people gave back to us. At the end of this is our action plan, on what we need to do to improve it.

We knew that the film itself could be improved upon in some areas and we let them know before they watched it, this would prevent them from giving us feedback that was not need as we already knew what it was that we needed to do.



EBI:
-Lip sync
-Cutting on the beat
-Length of shots

WWW:
- Good use of different types of shots
-Good narrative
-Good framing

When looking at all the feedback we found out information that will be beneficial to us, to make the music improve.  We found out that most people found that some of our shots where to long therefore we need to make them shorter by including more cut away's, this could also be down to the fact that we are missing a performance shot that needs to be put in, this then will allow some of the shots to be shorter than they are at the moment.

We also found out that people thought that the way we are cutting wasn't on the beat like how a music video should be, this is a problem we are addressing. The lip sycing within the video was good but within some parts it was out of time, so we will need to have a look at this and make sure that we make changes to this, so that everything is in time.

When speaking to the class about what we could do better someone said that we should have a performance part with the two main characters in, this is what we where going to have as a performance shot. Within this shot there will be dances.